Monday, November 18, 2013

Critique


This book had beautiful descriptions, but they were often difficult to understand.  The book changed narrators with each chapter and was told mostly through flashbacks.  The switching of narrators and time periods made it difficult to follow.  The story was character-driven because it is told through stories of the characters.  We think that Anwell/Gabriel has a mental disorder, which seems like Dissociative Identity Disorder or Schizophrenia.  He has an alternate personality, which falls under Dissociative Identity Disorder, but he also interacts with his alternate personality, which is a characteristic of Schizophrenia.  We felt that this text might be confusing and a little disturbing for young adult readers.  We think that Hartnett was trying to show that the trauma of Gabriel’s abusive parents and accidentally killing his brother caused him to develop a mental disorder.  His friendship with Finegan, his alternate personality, was strong, but very unhealthy.  We think that this could show young adults the effects of being in an unhealthy friendship like Gabriel and Finegan. 

Sonya Hartnett Biography


Sonya Harnett is a native of Melbourne, Australia where she began writing novels at the young age of thirteen.  In 1984, when Sonya was fifteen her first novel Trouble All the Way was published. Since Sonya met success at such a young age she was called a teenage novelty, a label that took years to erase.  Her work is now taken seriously and although her novels are targeted at a young adult audience, adults enjoy them as well.  She has written nineteen young adult books since her first publication.  She has been praised as one of the best Australian writers of her generation and has won countless awards both in and out of Australia, most notably being the prestigious Astrid Lindgren Prize for Children's and Young People's Literature.


Sources:
"Sonya Hartnett." Britishcouncil.org. British Counsil, 2011. Web. 18 Nov. 2013.
"About Sonya." Sonya Hartnett. Penguin Group, 2013. Web. 18 Nov. 2013.

Personal Thoughts


The book is somewhat confusing because of the flashbacks that happened throughout the book. We assumed that Finnigan was Gabriel second personality but I was not clear throughout the book. The ending did not explain everything together as well as we thought it would either. We liked how descriptive the author was but we were confused the majority of the book.

Quotes from first page


-       “I am dying; it’s a beautiful word. Like the long slow sigh of a cello; dying. But the sound of it is the only beautiful thing about it” -Gabriel
 
-       “My existence is nothing but a series of humiliations” -Gabriel

Quote from page 95


  “My father likes everything to be under his control” - Gabriel

Quote from page 98

         

 “ You lit fires as much as I did. You told me, go out and burn. Besides, we’re reflections, blood brothers, remember? What I do, you do.” (98) - Finnigan

Plot Points


-In hospital whole time – uses flashbacks to tell story of his life.
-Gabriel’s home life
o   Parents abusive
o   Thinks its aunt is his caretaker, but it’s a nurse from the hospital.
o   Vernon- brother, older, mental disability. Gabriel accidently kills by putting him in the refrigerator to stop his screaming
o   Surrender- dog, Finnigan and Gabriel’s both own him. Gabriel father makes him shoot him because Surrender kills another animal.  
Flashbacks
o   Finnigan and Gabriel meet
o   Make a deal- That Finnigan can do bad things as long as Gabriel does good things.
o   Setting fires – Finnigan sets fire all over the town.  No one can figure out who it is. The Dad starts a group to find the arsonist, but does not.  
o   Family issues- tells Finnigan about how he killed his brother by putting him in the fridge to stop crying.
o   Gabriel meets this Evangeline
o   Thinks that Finnigan wants to kill Evangeline
§  Finnigan thinks that Evangeline is using Gabriel and will get rid of him when she wants too.
o   Mom embarrasses him
o   Dad makes him kill Surrender
§  Surrender killed another animal
o   Kills parents
o   Gets taken away to Hospital
§  Find out that nurse is not aunt
§  That he has been in hospital whole time
o   Lying in hospital bed sees Vernon at window and flies away with him, symbolizing that he died.

Summary

  Surrender, by Sonya Hartnett, is a young adult novel about a boy who is dying and his best friend Finnigan. The story is told through flashbacks while Gabriel is, as we find out at the end, in a hospital.  Gabriel, whose real name is Anwell, accidentally killed his brother when he was seven.  He feels very guilty about this so when Gabriel and Finnigan become friends they make a pact together that Gabriel will do only good things so that Finnigan can do bad things. Finnigan goes around the town setting fires, which causes much upset, but is never found out to be the arsonist. Finnigan causes many problems in Gabriels life and is not nice to him.  Towards the end of the novel Gabriel kills his parents and is taken away.  As the book goes on it becomes more and more clear that Finnigan is Gabrial’s second personality.  In the end he sees his dead brother and Gabriel goes toward him, symbolizing his death.

Characters

1.     Gabriel – real name is Anwell. Main character. He is a boy that is dying at age 20. The book goes through in flashbacks to show is life. He lives in a small town and has no friends. He ends up meeting Finnigan, who becomes his friend and his dog, Surrender. Gabriel has a hard home life because if parents do not care too much and his brother has a mental disorder.

2.     Finnigan- Only friend of Gabriel. Homeless.  Has dog Surrender. He sets fires around the town. It turns out he is the other personality of Gabriel.

3.     Parents- Mom and Dad, are the parents of Gabriel and Vernon. The Dad is a lawyer.  The Dad is abusive toward Gabriel. They are not the best parents and they do not seem to care about their children that much. Gabriel ends up killing them with a hatchet. 

4.     Vernon- the older brother of Gabriel. Has a mental disorder.  Dies from when Gabriel was young he put him in the refrigerator.

5.     Aunt Sarah- Gabriel’s nurse, he thinks its his aunt caretaker


6.     Evangeline- Girl that Gabriel falls for, and wants to protect. Finnigan does not like her.